i am updating this poem
i post it since april
hope u guys could relate to this
butterflies
butterflies
i dare them to fly away
cos they're near me-
oh sweet innocent butterflies
why do they come and distract me?
each time i saw a cute man
walking by
i knew something that lingers me for a while
but i'm not suppose to feel this way
just cos i'm still young....
©2006 kai croft
11 comments:
Lovely poem, Kai.
Maybe butterflies have been sent here by God to watch over us . . . like undercover angels. What do you think? ;-)
ty sb
I remember this! Lovely, Princess Kai.
ty guys
wish I was still young. :)
cute poem! I can relate to this poem and I love butterflies.
i'm not so young anymore
but those butterflies still distract me :)
thanks kai
nice write
Kai, even older butterflies have those feelings. Love the rewrite.
Beautiful!
Love it!
Margie
ty all
that's lovely, kai! :-)
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