astonishing beauty
she blazes in
to this blushing
of an aurora sun
with significant smile
brighten
each dark second
of the day
but sadly thinking
she lived farther
than a 1,000 miles
away from
that certain gentleman
she hardly knew
yet her own heart knew his name
beating each time
she was captivated
by a romantic dream
causing her to wish and pray
that someday
she'd find love
as an
astonishing beauty
~
Copyright ©2006 kai croft
6 comments:
thanks ......
& i bet u are
Kai
Thank you for the invitation. The feeling beautifully expressed.
beautiful imagery, Kai! You truly have a poet's heart.
I found this tanka inside of the poem:
dark seconds . . .
thinking she lived farther
than a 1,000 miles
away from a gentleman
she hardly knew
Absolutely beautiful, Kai.
Kai, you have expressed your heart in beautiful words!!
this is beautiful, kai.
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