5/01/2006

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4/29/06

mom’s braided my hair
quietly the calm light
as she spoke of nothing
after the passing moment

copyright ©2006 kai croft

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice.:)

Kai said...

thanks:)

EATING POETRY said...

poignet... I know exactly the moment you're talking about.

Kai said...

thanks, eating poetry

ardi k said...

I especially like this one. Much is said in silence.

Kai said...

thank u ardi...

Kai said...

thank u

Unique Designs from Zazzle said...

another good write

Kai said...

thank u shane

Pat Paulk said...

Kai, this is excellent!!

robert d. wilson said...

mom’s braided my hair
quietly the calm light
as she spoke of nothing
after the passing moment

a beautiful poem, Kai. A suggestion:

mom braided my
hair quietly the calm
light as she spoke
of nothing after the
passing moment