kai - this is beautifully expressed, but it's not really haiku.
you don't tell about emotions in a haiku, you express them through imagery.
if you're interested in haiku, there are some useful links on other blogs... maybe you can check out matt morden's blog: http://mordenhaikupoetry.blogspot.com/ see the links under "beginners guides to writing haiku"
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kai - this is beautifully expressed, but it's not really haiku.
you don't tell about emotions in a haiku, you express them through imagery.
if you're interested in haiku, there are some useful links on other blogs... maybe you can check out matt morden's blog: http://mordenhaikupoetry.blogspot.com/
see the links under "beginners guides to writing haiku"
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