5/31/2006

stardust {Haiku)

stardust (Haiku)

stardust flows in air
wishing i'm with u tonight
so our fate sways-----
~
copyright ©2006 kai croft

3 comments:

peter said...

Good Haiku!

polona said...

kai - this is beautifully expressed, but it's not really haiku.

you don't tell about emotions in a haiku, you express them through imagery.

if you're interested in haiku, there are some useful links on other blogs... maybe you can check out matt morden's blog: http://mordenhaikupoetry.blogspot.com/
see the links under "beginners guides to writing haiku"

Jon Cox said...

VERY PRETTY!!!