5/12/2006

ur hands travels

ur hands travels      5/9/06               

ur hands travels
all over my skin
make me weak-
thinking of nothing
but ur fingertips
caress
my butterfly belly
oh
like a dream of pure wonder
i see ur face
lighten
maybe
i want to see u
more often---
and let ur hands
travel
through my soul
massaging my spirit
yet
u fill me up with wholeness

copyright ©2006 kai croft

14 comments:

Jon Cox said...

BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!! :o)
Tag you're it.

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks as always

Jon Cox said...

Yea today was good I just put up a huge entry on my site that I've been wanting to get out for a long while. How was your day?

Jon Cox said...

Hey! :o)
Thank you sooo much for your comment!!! :o) It's incredible to get such wonderful comments, that really means ALOT!!!! :o)
YOU'RE SO WONDERFUL!!!! :o)

Jon Cox said...

Hey Buddy! :o)
Thank you so much, I like you 2! You're so much fun!!! I've been wondering, where do you get your ideas for your poems? They are very captivating. Many of my ideas for creation come from my heart, dreams, imagination and things I loved as a child and I wanna bring them all into this world. How about you?

Danny Sillada said...

Hi kai, your poems are sensual and metaphysical.

Jon Cox said...

O awesome! Yeah, its pretty much the same here as well. :o)

Jon Cox said...

Hey Buddy! :o)
This weekend I'll be working on my projects. My parents are gone for the weekend so I'm gonna go for a walk tomorrow and pick up a Mothers Day present.
How about you??

Jon Cox said...

AWESOME, I can't wait 2 read it! :o)

Jon Cox said...

Blog Tag!

Jon Cox said...

Have a great night! :o)

Maddy said...

you are incredibly gifted-
this is so beautiful - i loved
it !!

Maddy said...

and..."you fill me up with
wholeness..."

i know this feeling - very
well said...

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks