5/10/2006

a wedding ring

a wedding ring

on his left hand
with golden ribbon
around his finger---

     flashing against my eye
~
Copyright ©2006 kai croft

8 comments:

Pat Paulk said...

Kai, this is excellent!! Alot said in very few lines and words!!

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks pat

Jon Cox said...

AWESOME!!!!

Carol said...

This reminds me of being single and the disappointment.

polona said...

wow! this one tells a lot in a few words!

Carol said...

Responding to your comment on my blog Kai,
I really think this gets your message across but if you don't think it does, the next one might.

Anonymous said...

Very pretty site! Keep working. thnx!
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