5/17/2006

writing on a tissue paper

writing on a tissue paper
writing on a tissue paper
my thoughts has been poured
like rain from the sky
and i discovered
my own deep skin
~

Copyright ©2006 kai croft

4 comments:

Jon Cox said...

BEAUTIFUL!!!! :o)
I have Snoopy in my January section. I still have to create Charlie Brown, Lucy & Woodstock!

Carol said...

Congratulations Kai.

Pat Paulk said...

Excellent Kai!!

robert wilson said...

I took the liberty of editing your poem and voila, you have a beautiful tanka. You are gifted, Kai.


writing on tissue
paper, my thoughts
poured like rain . . .
and i discovered
my own deep skin