6/02/2006

Hot Flashes

Hot Flashes

Hot flashes
Sweating away in fire
Cos of u

The heat’s on
& I need some cold water
Splashing over my body

Only to cool my chills---

Oh fan me fan me
I’m still on fire
Just cos of u

U standing
In front of me
& smile

I thought I’d die
~
copyright ©2006 kai croft

2 comments:

Jon Cox said...

HOTT HOTT HOTT!!!!
Thats really very good!
AWESOME JOB!!! :o)

Tim S said...

This poem has great intensity.