lying on
my bed & thinking of nothing
but lazy drifts over me
like a nice summer breeze
took a long stroll with my mom
this morning
& disappointment came along
with us----
after we came home
i fell asleep
for a couple of hours
it was just nothing
but a relaxing day------
~
copyright ©2006 kai croft
2 comments:
Kai,
May I translate some words in your poetry in Malay (formal language for Malaysian).
lying - sedang baring
on - di atas
my - saya
bed - katil
breeze - bayu
mom - mak / ibu
morning - pagi
we - kami
i (I) - saya / aku
relaxing- santai
day - hari
[Ebven I can translate the whole poem in Malay.]
Happy poeming Kai.
I'm glad your day was relaxing, but wish there was never any disappointment in it. Good poem, Kai, and I love your slideshows!:)
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