6/12/2006

wet

wet

wet as
i drip
away from
the flesh of clouds

oh rain argue
my nerves
cos

my heart burned
from the   piercing sunshine
of ur eyes

~
copyright ©2006 kai croft

4 comments:

Aurora said...

I have some favourite poems, but nothing that I've written.:)

Maddy said...

oh rain argue
my nerves...

is terrific...

rain
quiets my nerves.

yes kai, we are both "oh-so-romantic!"

that's why i love you!!!!!!!!!!

smiles!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

"wet as
i drip
away from
the flesh of clouds"

I think that's a wongerful line!

Delaleuverses said...

I love the rain and especially love poems about rain, thanks for sharing