7/04/2006

gorgeously explosions

as mom & i
walked into a night
of sweet fresh air
looking for some fireworks
& here they were

gorgeously explosions
into darken skies
~
©2006 kai croft

I just saw fireworks & they were real pretty…

4 comments:

ufukhati said...

Kai,

Fireworks need darkness,
so as fireflies.

samuru999 said...

Kai,
Very nice.
I did not go out to see
the fireworks. I can hear them
now as I am writing this.
My son put fireworks in my
heart today.
Read my poem.
I just wrote it.

Maddy said...

i adore fireworks.

pretty colors and dangerous
thrills of spills

Pat Paulk said...

They are pretty!! Good poem Kai!!