7/14/2006

a haiku again

I stare at ur eyes
Blankly with nothing to say
I feel butterflies----
~
©2006 kai croft

4 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I loke your 2 haiku! :)

Anonymous said...

Andrew - is "loke" a mix between "like" and "love"?:)

Kai - I answered you back on Magnapoets about how to write haiku. :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

how about like!!!!!:)
(I don't always use the spell-check

Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

Nice job...so much feeling there Kai.