8/10/2006

A cracking sound in the sky

A cracking sound in the sky

A cracking sound in the sky
I heard it
Like a heart beat
No wonder
The breeze feels warm
& somehow
I could tell the rain
Is coming downtown
~
©2006 kai croft

3 comments:

Aurora said...

Nicely done, Kai!

samuru999 said...

very nice Kai!
I am hoping for rain here!

forgotten somebody said...

very simple words and feelings, it makes for a subtly profound statement.