8/21/2006

An old man has fool her

An old man has fool her

Tell me
What’s wrong with
This picture
A young lady falls
For an old man
Who has grey hair
& wrinkles on his face

Yet she didn’t know
He was too ancient
Till

She saw him
On webcam
With a silly lie
That an old man told her

But the guilt in his heart
Has torn into shame
& she forgive him

So on
They are still friends
After all the several months

I must say
Things happened
No matter what’s going

& learned valuable lesson
Never fall for someone
Who’s pretending to be
Someone else

Especially online---
~
©2006 kai croft

5 comments:

samuru999 said...

Wonderful Kai!
I really like this!
A lesson learned!

Aurora said...

That's a good lesson!

Don Iannone said...

Nice one and so full of truth Kai.

Pat Paulk said...

Especially online!! Good for you Kai!

Shane said...

okay, I confess. I'm a highly trained duckbilled platypus. I just wanted a life!!!!

great poem!

The Internet has more lyres than a renaissance band.