10/28/2006

Haibun 10.28.2006

Haibun 10.28.2006

Last night I heard the rain tapping on my window washing away the dry lands while I was enjoying the darkness. I have tried to finish up my writing but I was distracted by some good music and  a lot of friendly emails. So I went to bed and gone to sleep. The rain taps becomes very louder and exotic like African drums. There was not a storm not, a heavy wind.  Just those rain taps came splashing out of the dark sky.

Haiku

No light
In the sky
Just rain dropping

     Sleeping
     As I hid myself
     In the warm covers---

10 comments:

Aurora said...

Hey, haibun writer. This is good! I especially like the first haiku.:)

Poetry by Kai said...

thank aa

samuru999 said...

I like this one Kai!
Very good!

Margie

Matt said...

Good job Kai.

I'm fine. How are you?

Poetry by Kai said...

i'm good....
thanks matt...

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks a lot everyone!

Pat Paulk said...

Very good Kai!! How was the dance?

Poetry by Kai said...

it was fun...thank u

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

Nice haibun! It is so hard for me to read your work in this print, is there a way that I can make it larger or is this it?

polona said...

good one, kai! i like it very much.