10/13/2006

Her knight vanished

Her knight vanished

Her knight vanish
He got on a white horse
& gallop away
Told her goodbye
Oh she cried
Tears comes pouring
Over her red roses
Knowingly
She finds herself
In a hollow of
Fairy tales
Weeping through
The steps upon
The floor
As she look at
Her shadow
Cover up
The pure moonlight
She mopes she sobs
Her knight vanished
He appears
In her sweetest dream
While darkness blazes over
The room with
Candlelight on
She walks around
Reciting her own sad poetry

She speaks:
“My knight vanished
He turned away
& left my heart
So broken
Now I cannot fly
No more
He’s becoming
My immortal”

©2006 Kai Croft

12 comments:

Aurora said...

Aw, another sad one! But you've got lots of great images here.

Poetry by Kai said...

thank u....
i have build a character
in this poem...
:-)

Aurora said...

Yes, you have. That's a good technique.

Poetry by Kai said...

thank u fasting aurora

samuru999 said...

Yes, a sad poem Kai....
but, as Aurora said great imagery
here!
Very good!

Aurora said...

You're welcome, Princess Kai.:)

Poetry by Kai said...

awwwwwwwwwww
u so nice

thank u margie

Jon Cox said...

That is VERY VERY touching!!! Beautiful work as always! :o)

Jon Cox said...

I like your new profile image by the way! :oD

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks jon
:-]

polona said...

ah... sad indeed.
love
She finds herself
In a hollow of
Fairy tales

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks polona