7/28/2007

The hotel room


I stayed at the hotel room

Just staying there

Like Michelle Branch, she only writes on

Hotel paper

I’ve been in her shoes right now

My thoughts keep coming along

And these emotions have built up inside me

Oh I stayed at the hotel room

I just leave the beach

With a little frown upon my face

Knowing I didn’t say a word

But well I got to go along

Not fair for me

I wanted to stay in the sun

Tanning away under the sun

And write billion of poems

Overcastting the ocean,,,,,

7 comments:

floots said...

poems to rival the ocean
poems which touch every coast
thanks kai

Aurora said...

I'd stay on the beach all day if I could, too! :) When I was a kid, we even used to spend our nights camping on the beach.

Irene said...

You have a wonderful way with words. Keep at it! ;p

iamnasra said...

This is so sweet . gentle ...
Hope you are well and having great time

polona said...

i too love to stay on the beach...
but you wrote a beautiful poem at the hotel room :)

Kai C. said...

thank you guys

Annie Wicking and Loman Austen said...

Great, keep it up you will go far.

best wishes,

Annie