7/24/2007

if i linger

would you keep me?

if i linger

would you feel not so lonely anymore?

if i only linger

would you love just me?

cos when you’re here

my heart beats forever

oh dear,

don’t you see?

this life of mine

seems even brighter

as you come

looking, smiling

saying those beautiful words

to my ears

and i wonder

if i linger you

would you be whole once again?

7 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this is wonderful -- you're getting better and better :)

Kai C. said...

thank you andrew:)

Margie said...

Love this poem....so very much Kai!

Thanks for the visit and the huggggs!
Ive been so busy, I've had no time to be at my blog!

Going away for the weekend with my son, hubby and Jake!

See you next week!
I know you'll have more wonderful poems posted.

HUGGGGGGGZ Kai!
Have a great weekend!

Margie:)

Margie said...

Just came by again to say "good morning" Kai!

We are all set to leave on our weekend trip.
We are going to Vail, CO.
It's soooo beautiful there, and I'm so looking forward to getting away, and spend quality time with my family!
I have hardly seen my son in 2 weeks, as he has been playing baseball out of state.

Well, bye Sweet kai!
Have a wonderful weekend!

HUGS!

Margie:)

polona said...

oh, i love this one, kai! :)

Don Iannone said...

A real beauty, Kai. Enjoy your weekend.

Shai said...

I am loving this piece.