dear shooting star,

where are you?

i am looking for you

my shooting star

i need your glow, your twinkle

flashing way across the scenery

of blue skies

oh darling shooting star

where are your star friends?

where is your fate?

i am looking for my dreams

my conversations with you

but you never come and shoots right

pass me

so instead, i stay in my room

and write poetry

until you race across the sky

and caught my eye


your friend,



Margie said...

Hi Kai
I really enjoyed this one!
Thank you!
I'm always gazing up at the stars!


Kai C. said...


floots said...

the sudden light of a shooting star
the sudden thought and poem
great stuff kai
thank you

Borut said...

No shooting stars here right now... But a lot of rain coming down!:)

Anonymous said...

Wow, that's beautiful!

polona said...

great metaphor!

Kai C. said...

thanks every1