the shelter
i went to a shelter
a shelter of
Christmas
children stare
didn’t greet
but adults said hello
and that was it
paintings are hung
baskets and
boxes of shoes
i quietly stroll
through the long hall
and too many families
walking
carrying stuff
oh i stood
sat
waiting
thinking of nothing
though i felt this
unfamiliar loudness…….
~
3 comments:
Good work Kai!
I think your last line..."though I felt this unfamilar loudness" is very good!
Margie
thank you margie
I agree with Margie. Very effective.
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