passed the red rose12-9-07

passed the red rose

you gave the red rose

to him

he gave it to me

but i put it down

on the table

looking at its crimson beauty

the way love smells

i felt and

thought of

just my crush

it was not a rose

it is the sweetest love

that passed on

right back to me…..


floots said...

this has so much warmth in it
thank you

Kai C. said...

thank u

Lyrically speaking said...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm, this sounds like someone whose heart has been broken by that rose, nice work Miss Kai