5/27/2008

memorial day (love poem)

i think of

you

on a typical monday

memorial day

i am spending my time off

just to count

how many thoughts of you

slipping away

into pretty blue

closer to wonder

if you ever think of

me as much as i do

on a typical moment

cos i am thinking

every day i just breathe

and feeling little butterflies

inside my skin

you flew out

of anywhere

just strolling

over my brain

and oh, you let me

imagine your dark, strong complexion

all day

like every wistful sweet dream

~

10 comments:

polona said...

awww... how romantic!

Kai C. said...

thanks

rohit said...

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
What a clever writing style you have. I really like the way you described your not-so-loved items, and the slideshow was brillo. I saw Mud's slideshow yesterday with the spotty tights, and loved that, too.

Cynthia said...

Ih, Kai, the love here is so
evident, a beautiful poem full
of loving, sweet feelings.

LadyWritesTheBlues said...

Beautiful!

You have a true gift!

You could probably make these high gas prices sound like music to our ears! LOL.

LadyWritesTheBlues said...

Beautiful!

You have a true gift!

You could probably make these high gas prices sound like music to our ears! LOL.

LadyWritesTheBlues said...

Beautiful!

You have a true gift!

You could probably make these high gas prices sound like music to our ears! LOL.

LadyWritesTheBlues said...

Um...sorry-i did this via my phone and didn't think they went through.

rohit said...

hiiiiiiiiii

how r u

i hope you enjoy every minute of your busy life


you are fantastic!!!

a kiss for you, my dear friend!

god bless u dear

can we exchange our link

r u ready to do?

yes

or

no

still i m confused
sorry for asking again
don't mined dear friend

Fever said...

this was beautiful