autumn days
autumn days
leaves are falling
and i remember those sweet autumn days
when you were on my mind
made me blush
how that happen, my dear?
those autumn days
i remember when you were there
walking with your shadow
and oh, i almost pass out
but i was cool
in my own shoes
and so much calm
butterflies didn't go over my head
cos those autumn days were my most beautiful days
i ever had
when leaves change their colors
and i saw you
smiling
giving me a slight pitch on my arm
as we exchange words
in that sweet moment
i liked you through autumn days
we glances our ways to our different direction
with feeling i have developed just passing by
ah autumn days
i don't count them
i never count how many thoughts of you
i just sat there
flashing my grins
blushing
knew i gotta crsh on you
on those days
on autumn days....
14 comments:
very romantic :)
i just saw you 'troubled' some where and then this --a wonderful celebration of love and life!! :-)
to whom was that 'certain kind of woman' lecturing, Kai??
so, as it is, we know, and perhaps live life, on the same terms.....far far away, yet so close :-)
lovingly,
see again!
devika
Kai: This is lovely. I love autumn. Hope you are well.
thank you
Under a birch tree,
The fresh top of a molehill
Grins in autumn sun:
'Those were the days...!':)
Hi Kai, you have a nice blog. Beautiful write. Take good care. God Bless.
back to romance, are you! beautifully romantic (but i like your other voice, too)
What a sweet poem. Autumn days sometimes make me sad.
I have to ask: How do you write all the time? Do you ever get writer's block? I am at a block right now.
shai- i sent you a reply on your blog
polona- thank you always
thank you venus66
Autumn days
are beautiful. I love Autumn and your beautiful poem reminded me some lovely, sweet moments.
Thank you Kai for sweet autumn days!
your welcome! :)
I LOVE this sweetest Autumn
love poem, a link to your poem
will be on my blog. LOVE!
This is a very nice poem Kai it sounds like it comes from the heart!
Keep writing Nick
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