10/12/2008

autumn days

autumn days

autumn days

leaves are falling

and i remember those sweet autumn days

when you were on my mind

made me blush

how that happen, my dear?

those autumn days

i remember when you were there

walking with your shadow

and oh, i almost pass out

but i was cool

in my own shoes

and so much calm

butterflies didn't go over my head

cos those autumn days were my most beautiful days

i ever had

when leaves change their colors

and i saw you

smiling

giving me a slight pitch on my arm

as we exchange words

in that sweet moment

i liked you through autumn days

we glances our ways to our different direction

with feeling i have developed just passing by

ah autumn days

i don't count them

i never count how many thoughts of you

i just sat there

flashing my grins

blushing

knew i gotta crsh on you

on those days

on autumn days....

14 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very romantic :)

Devika said...

i just saw you 'troubled' some where and then this --a wonderful celebration of love and life!! :-)

to whom was that 'certain kind of woman' lecturing, Kai??

so, as it is, we know, and perhaps live life, on the same terms.....far far away, yet so close :-)

lovingly,
see again!
devika

Don Iannone said...

Kai: This is lovely. I love autumn. Hope you are well.

Kai C. said...

thank you

Borut said...

Under a birch tree,
The fresh top of a molehill
Grins in autumn sun:

'Those were the days...!':)

venus66 said...

Hi Kai, you have a nice blog. Beautiful write. Take good care. God Bless.

polona said...

back to romance, are you! beautifully romantic (but i like your other voice, too)

Shai said...

What a sweet poem. Autumn days sometimes make me sad.

I have to ask: How do you write all the time? Do you ever get writer's block? I am at a block right now.

Kai C. said...

shai- i sent you a reply on your blog
polona- thank you always

Kai C. said...

thank you venus66

krystyna said...

Autumn days
are beautiful. I love Autumn and your beautiful poem reminded me some lovely, sweet moments.

Thank you Kai for sweet autumn days!

Kai C. said...

your welcome! :)

Cynthia said...

I LOVE this sweetest Autumn
love poem, a link to your poem
will be on my blog. LOVE!

Art and Poetry said...

This is a very nice poem Kai it sounds like it comes from the heart!

Keep writing Nick