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i love you
does it hurt to say it?
do you feel scare when i say it?
cos my heart is beating
loving you is what i naturally feel
and it never goes away….
love is such a strange thing. it seems so easy yet it seems so powerful.
I agree with Andrew. LOVE is very powerful. It is very special too.Take care, Kai.
(typos)I too can only agree with you all here, Kai...i never felt it was that powerful...yes its a very strong feeling in me, when i love someone...but i would never chose to say that so strongly or claim it. i just cannot..and as a tender feeling i may convey, not the power with which i feel...i will have to use similies from nature, but they dont convey equally to the other...yeah, the love within never goes away...never....love you, so kai...devika
Hi my dear Kai...you poem was about you saying of your love to someone..and i said me loving someone..hhhaahaahok Kai..in this case..i believe love is about freedom...my father always used to stop my mother when she would begin to be possesive about us...he would say -- allow the butterflies to fly, if they come back they are yours..if not they are the nature's ...and he was right, i feel...no?but then why keep saying that you love someone...its always there and always understood, no?even then i would keep telling chilren, every time i have them near...it makes them happy, and me too for a while...they need love more, i had felt..love,devika
Hello, you amorist you. :)Nice work, Kai.
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