4/29/2006

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I think of u
like shoes
or maybe fabulous stars

not words but
like the city of your eyes
I like to travel

discovering u..........

copyright ©2006 kai croft

7 comments:

ardi k said...

Great love poem. The city of your eyes!! Yeah! I can travel forever in the look of a loved one. Keep up the good work.

Aurora said...

Kai, you have a fresh way of expressing yourself. I agree with Ardi K, keep it up! :)

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks guys

Shane said...

very poignant - a very endearing writing style

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks shane!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

not words but
like the city of your eyes
I like to travel

that was wonderful---

Poetry by Kai said...

thank u