5/03/2006

Dandelion dusks

Dandelion dusks

blow them away
into winds
just blow them
thm dandelion dusks

made a wish
so silently
not thinking
but reminiscing the sweet dream


my heart whispers
blue sky  listens
and i sigh---

what a day
to close my eyes
and sweetly sigh---

cos in those dandelion dusks
i keep wishing
love was at my windowpane
tapping like dew

copyright ©2006
kai croft

8 comments:

Aurora said...

I love this one, Kai! So whimsical, and full of yearning. I could see several images in my mind as I read it.

Poetry by Kai said...

thank aurora

pepektheassassin said...

Hi Kai! Nice poems! I had to check you out because my 4 yr old grandson's called "Kai"--but pronounced with a long i. His name is Kaito, and in Japanese, the Kai means "sea" and the to means "star," so Sea star, or the North Star. He has stars glowing on his bedroom ceiling, the Big Dipper, pointing to the North Star. Don't know why I'm telling you all this. (I assume you pronounce you name with a long a). It just caught my eye. You have several lovely blog sites. Keep on!

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks

Jon Cox said...

Thank you so much for stopping by my blog & thank you so much for your comment! :o) I appreciate it so much! I REALLY like your poems! They are all very beautifully written as well as captavating!!
KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK! :o)

Shane said...

another great poem kai

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks guys

floots said...

beautiful
love the whole thing but that title
is an especial knockout