Dandelion dusks
blow them away
into winds
just blow them
thm dandelion dusks
made a wish
so silently
not thinking
but reminiscing the sweet dream
my heart whispers
blue sky listens
and i sigh---
what a day
to close my eyes
and sweetly sigh---
cos in those dandelion dusks
i keep wishing
love was at my windowpane
tapping like dew
copyright ©2006
kai croft
7 comments:
I love this one, Kai! So whimsical, and full of yearning. I could see several images in my mind as I read it.
thank aurora
Hi Kai! Nice poems! I had to check you out because my 4 yr old grandson's called "Kai"--but pronounced with a long i. His name is Kaito, and in Japanese, the Kai means "sea" and the to means "star," so Sea star, or the North Star. He has stars glowing on his bedroom ceiling, the Big Dipper, pointing to the North Star. Don't know why I'm telling you all this. (I assume you pronounce you name with a long a). It just caught my eye. You have several lovely blog sites. Keep on!
thanks
another great poem kai
thanks guys
beautiful
love the whole thing but that title
is an especial knockout
Post a Comment