my wavy hair
my wavy hairmy wavy hairswaying upon the windas i drove offshining underneaththe light----smelling so sweetoh i wishfor u to run ur fingersthrough my haireven wishu tuck my hairbehind my earso u can can seemy blushing faceso u can rubmy brown cheekoh i could smile foreverif u only tay with mei could seeu playing wthmy wavy hairas u kissmy foreheadiindeed i feelthe warmth ofur handsblessing me---~copyright ©2006 kai croft
6 comments:
very visual...I like this, especially the ending...a very sweet twist!
Very nice!
this reminds me of the first time i was in love. i was almost 18. (i was late bloomer.)
you've done a wonderful job of this poem. thank you.
Love your style.
simply beautiful.
this is sweet, kai :)
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