long walk
on grass where we locate
a tree---
~
shake hands with a tree
greeting too many leaves
on each branch--
~
this day--
it seems so quiet and sweet
i wonder why--
~
©2006 kai croft
i would like to share some of my haikus... i hope u enjoyed it...
9 comments:
Kai,
I really enjoyed this.
I like so much these words
"This day
it seems so quiet and sweet
i wonder why"
thank u...
kai, these work well as one poem!
thank u
Beautiful and meaningful kai.
Well done Kai, enjoyed. So, you were shaking a tree, so to speak:)
i agree with polona
(though the middle one would be my favourite if i had to pick)
nice work
I really like these three. Like meeting with the Tree of Life, whatever that is...:)
:)
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