10/27/2006

My Edgar Allen Poe Poem

My Edgar Allen Poe Poem

I know that crow sound
Coming from my window
He visit me in the darkness
While I’m asleep

Yet I recognize that black bird
He opened his wings & look me in
The eye, wandering my soul
I am frightening

I know that bird that crow
He sat on the roof facing
Me in the glass
I shook with fear
Trying to call mom
But she’s still dreaming

Oh he’s disappear
Where did he go?
He fades into its shadow
Just flying off into the pale moon

That poem echoes my head
In fear I heard whispering
The lady’s name
Out of the dark disguise

“Lenore….”

I scream.
~
©2006 Kai Croft


20 comments:

samuru999 said...

Kai
I see you're still trying to scare me....better stop it!!!

Oh, this is good!
You did a great job!
love it!

*hugs*

Margie

Aurora said...

Wow, I go away for a few days, and what do I come back to find? Princess Kai has gone over to the dark side! :)

I agree with Margie - scary, but great job! :)

Aurora said...

Back to add - I love your profile picture. Purple is certainly your colour, and you look so cool and confident in that shot, like a career woman! :)

starry nights said...

Scary just in time for Halloween. Have a good weekend Kai.

Pat Paulk said...

Boo back at ya!! Good halloween poem!!

Matt said...

Hi Kai. Cool blog.

Poetry by Kai said...

thank u matt. i hope u come back soon...aurora told me who tuung is. i probably forgot....

Poetry by Kai said...

thank you everyone for your comments

hugs

polona said...

wow, kai - another goodie!

i know who tuung is too :)

take care!

Poetry by Kai said...

thanks polona

samuru999 said...

Kai
I was just checking my comment box...and saw yours...
Now what is this about Aurora...
you must tell me more!!!!

Margie

samuru999 said...

Kai
Who's picking on who?
You or Aurora?

Poetry by Kai said...

Margie- its aurora, she's the one who's picking on me...

aurora-if u read this,
ur my best friend....
:-)

Aurora said...

Margie, I plead innocence! It's Kai who's picking on me! :)

Poetry by Kai said...

aurora-

ur the one
who is picking
on me

i'm an angel
hehe

samuru999 said...

kai and Aurora
I think you both are picking on each other...and having lots of fun doing it!
Am I right?

Margie

Aurora said...

Margie, you know us too well.:)

Poetry by Kai said...

ya margie

very well

samuru999 said...

I knew I was right!
You both are funny...
and make me laugh!!! lol!
Well, have fun ...
picking on each other!


Margie

Poetry by Kai said...

u see what u did...
aurora

u made margie laugh.....
haha