1/29/2007

a thought that counts...



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a thought that counts...

a thought that counts
starting with my heart
it beats like music
not just a drum
but the coin's dropping
on the ground
hidden in a stranger's shadow

yes that’s how i write poetry
that’s how i let my voice be heard

is the little rhythm of my soul
flow on mid air paper
words never count unless
i drift along the breath within a spirit
of the wind

indeed a thought that counts
for me
oh does it counts for you?
~

9 comments:

samuru999 said...

Just lovely, Kai!
It counts so much for me too!

Margie

Pat Paulk said...

"i drift along the breath within a spirit", excellent line of poetry!!

Kai C. said...

thank u
:-]

Aurora said...

Hey, Kai, good poem. :)

Kai C. said...

:-]
hey thanks

polona said...

it most certainly counts!
love it!

starry nights said...

Sure Kai it is the thought that counts. Hey I give you the letter"C" for the tag.Lets see what you come up with.take care kai.

Kai C. said...

ok thank u

urban butterfly said...

thoughts are wonderful because I love to think. Sometimes, I get lost in my thoughts.