my chills
my chills
ran down to my little ashy toes
I’m kind of cold
but I felt warm
its only me
when I get my chills running up
my spine, I shiver
especially I came out of the bathtub
or a pool the cold droplets of water lingers
every curve of my body
for about oh a long second of 5 minutes
I don’t know
though I dried up in the sun or under the warm blanket
still I keep shaking
my chills
a sign of trouble a signal of love
even nervous breakdowns
sometimes when I get my chills , I cry
& yet I never laugh
through every fear I took
my chills comes & take the power all over me
like majesty queens
but I show them chills
who’s boss & suddenly
I found the strong compassionate butterfly poet soldier
In me
~
9 comments:
Ooooh. That's nice. Brrrr. I like the music, the repetition you use to good effect, and some of the lines which really remain. Bravo...
thank you rethabile
Awww, Kai, this is sweet. My favourite part is this: "& suddenly I found the strong compassionate butterfly poet soldier In me".
amazing, how every experience good or bad is worth it if we find the words to express it in a poem.
thank you guys!
ep- that is so true!hope u are doing welll
This is wonderful. Kai!
Just wonderful!
thank you margie
Got your message...
I gave Jake a big pet from you!
Kai, have lots and lots of fun at the dance...
I know you'll have a wonderful time!
Tell me all about it later...ok!
I'm taking Jake for a walk now!
Hugs back to you, Sweetie!
wow! love it, kai!
((hugs))
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