4/22/2007

a time a place 3-6-07


a time a place

where i find you

in my dream

awakening by

a star


your face

in dark clouds

have passed me

by while

i touch the wind

of you

10 comments:

Rethabile said...

Subtle, yet engaging. The way I like 'em.

Kai C. said...

thank you!

Aurora Antonovic said...

Heeeeeeeey, this is beautiful!

Kai C. said...

thank u

iamnasra said...

this so touching...How I wish if love can happen like this at least to reach me that way

Pat Paulk said...

Kai, you've touched the inner core of beauty with this one.

gautami tripathy said...

Sweet, kai!

[a} said...

Gorgeous words.

"your face in dark clouds" is a nice line. That's what having a crush is like for me..if you know what I mean :)

urban butterfly said...

I love dreaming about the one I love. =)

polona said...

oh, beautiful!