6/09/2007

hearts crumbling


hearts crumbling into

pieces of togetherness

over the place when

lovers stepped on

thy tips of only ten toes

dancing

where rose petals lied over the

naked floors

while little tall candles

lit up

like the pale of moonlight……

10 comments:

Aurora said...

How romantic! :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I agree

Pat Paulk said...

"...candles lit up like the pale of moonlight" Beautiful!!!

Don Iannone said...

Lovely Kai. I like this.

polona said...

romantic indeed!
love it

Kai C. said...

thank u all
hugs

Velu Nair said...

Sweeet!
:)

gautami tripathy said...

Very loverly!

urban butterfly said...

this is really beautiful, Kai! Wow...love your words!

Ellen M Johns said...

There is lovely imagery here. A gentle, soothing poem.