My own Cinderella story
Ok once there is a girl
Name Cinderella who lives with
2 wicked green eye step sisters
And brown eye bitchy step mother
Cinderella has dark brown eyes
Well they lived in a duplex next to
The beach where the sun and rain mixes
Together becoming a rainbow
One day out of the blue
The 2 wicked green eye step sisters
Decided to go clubbing and leave Cinderella behind
Doing her own house chores
While brown eye bitchy step mother
Is making her life more miserable
As ever
Telling her what to do
Like a slave
Yet she is a servant
So they went clubbing
Without her
But then the fairy godmother came with her pixie wings
She has a wand that fills with star dusks
Waving it & proof
Cinderella became a superstar…..
She went clubbing
And found her smoky hot prince charming
They dance all night
Till 12AM
She ran home without saying goodbye
Of course she left her glass slipper
On the street corners
The prince found it
And the very next day
He searches for that beautiful Cinderella
Yet there she is
She saw him
With her glass slipper
She ran into his arms
And he puts her glass slipper on
Somehow
They got married
& have gorgeous babies
Probably lived happily ever after……
♥
14 comments:
Ha! :)
Was Cinderella's dress pink by any chance?
The dress had to be pink!
I just bet you Aurora!
Right Kai?
Loved this one!
Thank you for sharing it Sweet Kai!
The prince had no choice, she was the most beautiful clubber of all!!
I loved this, kai. I'm all smiles with poetic pleasure. This is magnificent:
"So they went clubbing
Without her." That's absolutely not the thing to do to anyone!
I like the way it "todayifies" your poem. I don't know if I'm communicating my feeling here. Anyway, love it.
Beautiful cinderella story!
I finally did your tag!
Great "story poem" Kai. Enjoyed it and hope things are better for you these days. Best wishes, Don
nice one kai
that final "probably" made me smile
cheers
love this.
hope things are going well for you.
Brought Cinderella up to date.
Great adaption of the Pink Cinderella.
:o) hugs 4u
Cute!
Hi Kai...just dropped by to say hello and wish you well. Hope all is going well. I know you are going through some changes. Sometimes it's just downright hard. Best wishes, Don
its been awhile ..are you well >>>
Long since I stopped by. I hope you are doing well.
awww...my favourite fairytale...re-told in a modern way. Great stuff Kai.
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