whirlwinds of a woman

whirlwinds of a woman

whirlwinds of a woman
twiddle on and on
around and around
as she skips she slips
knowing her world is colorful
like a darling eyes of a goddess
she swims in the sky
landed herself in her own shoes
without words floating
just melodies soothing
and clouds passing over
within love is golden
even kind
the most sweetest thing
she has found........


Devika said...
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Devika said...

oh WOW!

Lovely, Kai dear...
I see you in that woman...infact every true woman :))


Kai C. said...


Margie said...

Oh, I love this!
Well done, Kai!

Have a wonderful weekend!


Anonymous said...

Nice little write.
I am really wanting to make the pomegranate smoothie with my daughter, Becky but all the fruit shops have no pomegranates and they can't seem to get them, so will put this on hold for now...sigh.

krystyna said...

"Whirlwind of woman" -
what a beautiful title
/ I like this words/.
It will be good for dancing song.

Have a great day, dear Kai!

Art and Poetry said...

Other neat poem Kai!
keep it up!

Cynthia said...

Kai this poem is delightful and
full of love!

Kai C. said...

thank you all..