another family road trip
long ride on highways
a chilly spring weather
& i'd be gone to sleep
in the backseat where
i sit with my nieces & my mom
& we'd be all crunch up
yet the clouds would follow us
down south in the shadows beaming over
the fields cos more showers are coimng by
trees maybe mountains
oh flowers
i even taste the early summer
sweetness paints everywhere
& i must wonder if i find another newborn piece of myself
on this
another family road trip
.........
copyright ©2006 kai croft
this weekend i'd be out of town so i come back tomorrow evening!
pls leave comment on my blog:)
thanks
3 comments:
You've got some good lines here, like,
"I even taste the early summer"
and
"and I must wonder if I find another newborn piece of myself on this another family trip"
Hope you're having a good time, Kai....:)
well, i've been writing for a long time. (long as in..i'm only 21 years old, so it couldnt be that long). but still :) but i've only been trying haiku for a couple months. I did it in high school, but not since then until now
This brings back a lot of memories for me too. It is also an inspiration for one I hope to write. I'll think about it.
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