tomato girl
she sat & ate her little red tomatoes
her tongue give its a taste
so delicious
like maybe sour of words
overflowing the rhythm
indeed she was called
tomato girl
cos she loves her some tomatoes
with nothing plain
to her its like poetry in her mouth
when she chews up
a few sweet sentences
capturing a silent sound
between her teeth
wandering off each breath
oh she kind of hums
& say "i love it"
~
© Kai Croft
9 comments:
I really like this!
I don't like tomatoes but I like thi one! Very Zen Buddist like. Becoming one with whatever you're doing. Escapes me most of the time.:)
Kai, I love tomatoes too!! Cherries, Romas, Grape, and big fat ripe ones!! Poem made my mouth water!!!
ty all
These are both good poems. Well done, pp bfly! :)
ty aa
you made me want a tomato :)
very good!
Love both poems!
And, I do love tomatoes! Yum! Yum!
Have a wonderful day Kai!
Margie
ty everyone
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