4/09/2007


4/9/07




A Daffodil


A daffodil

Grows

In her garden

Counting each clover leaf pops out

Only before her eyes

She looks and said,

wow, you’re a beauty

But where’s the soul?”



Colorful trees


I saw pink, purple

Maybe blue

They are intimately beautiful

As I drove on by

Blossoming my way………..


16 comments:

Aurora Antonovic said...

Hi, Poetry Writing Machine. :) Nice stuff.

Kai C. said...

haha

hi miss aurora

Aurora Antonovic said...

:P

Kai C. said...

i love u too.

Aurora Antonovic said...

Hugssss.

Kai C. said...

biggg hugsssss

wrdup said...

I love Daffodil. The message was thought provoking for those looking only on the surface. Beauty is soul deep!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like the daffodil one! There are so many people like that -- beautiful, but no soul

Aurora Antonovic said...

Good thing you're more than a pretty face, Andrew. :)

Pat Paulk said...

I agree with Andrew, some aren't more than a pretty face. Excellent poem Kai!!

polona said...

love it, especially the daffodil. a message to all of us :)

Don Iannone said...

Great ones, Kai.

I agree with Aurora...poetry writing machine!

Nes said...

Hi.... How you doing ?:))

Plus Ultra said...

Lovely poetry, I havent bee here for a while, do come by I have a parallel site at Multiply, come by and see and maybe leave acomment and join up, click here http://alwaysmorebeyond.multiply.com kianseng

Kai C. said...

thank you all!

i'm really glad u like my poem.

:-]andrew, cheers!

Shai said...

I see you getting the Spring Fever. LOL.

Kai, check out my blog I am featuring you there.