4/9/07
A Daffodil
A daffodil
Grows
In her garden
Counting each clover leaf pops out
Only before her eyes
She looks and said,
“wow, you’re a beauty
But where’s the soul?”
♥
Colorful trees
I saw pink, purple
Maybe blue
They are intimately beautiful
As I drove on by
Blossoming my way………..
♥
16 comments:
Hi, Poetry Writing Machine. :) Nice stuff.
haha
hi miss aurora
:P
i love u too.
Hugssss.
biggg hugsssss
I love Daffodil. The message was thought provoking for those looking only on the surface. Beauty is soul deep!
I really like the daffodil one! There are so many people like that -- beautiful, but no soul
Good thing you're more than a pretty face, Andrew. :)
I agree with Andrew, some aren't more than a pretty face. Excellent poem Kai!!
love it, especially the daffodil. a message to all of us :)
Great ones, Kai.
I agree with Aurora...poetry writing machine!
Hi.... How you doing ?:))
Lovely poetry, I havent bee here for a while, do come by I have a parallel site at Multiply, come by and see and maybe leave acomment and join up, click here http://alwaysmorebeyond.multiply.com kianseng
thank you all!
i'm really glad u like my poem.
:-]andrew, cheers!
I see you getting the Spring Fever. LOL.
Kai, check out my blog I am featuring you there.
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