this sweet love poem
this sweet love poem
is for nobody particular
but i rather remind myself
just thinking of you
i will remember you
like back in the days
when
i first had a crush on
you
and you knew this
all along
though i’m not writing
this poem to you
i’m writing
this poem to nobody
just for the love of it
cos it’s about love
and how rare love is
when you are with
somebody’s special
or my heart beats
racing
when i see your face
like i said
this sweet love poem is
not for you
not for nobody any particular
if i ever write this type
of love poem
i would scribble down
on paper
and speaks out loud
loudly enough
for you to hear
me say
this is a love poem
i wrote
at an open mike
at a café
through spoken word
i would speak rhythms
the flows of my heart
poetically
while angels sing
in peacefully
harmonies
and
i would share every piece
of me
teardrops of me
only to you
but this is not a love poem
that goes straight to you
it flutters directly to you
like a butterfly
you hear me
in those harmonies
bittersweet harmonies
~
8-8-08
11 comments:
I really like your idea for this - nice
Your poetry is very nice, the style of writing is very free.
I have set up a link with your poetry blog.
Bye!
thank you. j.andrew & art&poetry
Brilliant!!!
Really elegant music I heared in your poem and I Loved this poem.
Ps
Yesterday evening my comp. stopped working. Today is ok.
Have a blessing Sunday, Kai!
thank you. you have a beautiful sunday!
i love how this flows...
Wonderful poem...I like your writings. Keep up the spirit.
thank u
Beautiful!
Oh Kai, I love this poem, the beauty of the circular motion/love,
the gentle way you use words to
tell us love is precious.
Thank you, Kai!
Kai,
Reached you through Polona's.
I feel happy that I did...
The poetic logic and flow is just simple and straight
& I found 'myself' there some where...and so tempted to let you know...
Loved it!
I too write poetry. Please do visit when time permits...
http://devika-jyothi.blogspot.com/
I am on a holiday....but will reach you back when I get online next time...
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