9/21/2008

moonlit floor

you're alive
on a moonlit floor
i see your sweet face
at me
gazing without words
instead, i took your hand
and you lift me up
into your arms
upon the moonlit floor
cradling me
with your kisses
your oh so sweet-nothings
while stars become
angels' eyes
spying down
on us
at the monlit floor
dancing away

16 comments:

Borut said...

Good!:) A five-star heavenly hotel!:)

Kai said...

thanks

polona said...

wow! just beautiful!

Kai said...

thank you polona

Art and Poetry said...

This is nice and happy! there is a lot of depressing poems on the web, its good to see something cheerful.

Keep writing Kai!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very romantic! nice work. :)

Devika Jyothi said...

Hi Kai!

So wonderful are you..to be on the moonlit floor and write such fine lines..happiness kills me..at times..

Been here before, will do again more often...

do i invite you -- But 'A certain kind of woman' would love to have you there...
see again!
devika

krystyna said...

Hi Kai,
soo long I didn't see you!
How are you?

I love this romantic dance.
Beautiful!!!

Love & hugss

Jimmy said...

I tot it was your bday

krystyna said...

Happy Birthday to You Dear Kai!

Sorry, I'm late.

Jimmy said...

why must u celebrate your birth on just one day in the year


celebrate Life every moment of every day

Anonymous said...

everyday is a gift....that is why it is called the present



Happy Birthday Again, sweets

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I miss your poetry.....

Devika Jyothi said...

Me, a fan of your poetry, and 'the Certain Kind of Woman' who writes her own verse both miss you Kai...

Do something for the two :-)

Hope you are doing good Kai, my sweet girl!

see you soon!
devika

Kai said...

awww! thank you guys. i post one today.

venuss66 said...

How so beautiful. You are so sweet. I loved reading your poems.
Best wishes, Kai.