5/27/2007


Tagged by miss urban butterfly


Rules are:
* Each player starts with eight random facts/habits about themselves.
* People who are tagged need to write posts in their own blog about their eight things and post these rules.
* At the end of your post, you need to choose eight people to get tagged and list their names.


  1. I love writing poetry, love being such a butterfly poet

  2. I like being surrounding by nature

  3. my favorite saying is “No Comment”.

  4. I flirt a lot

  5. lazy

  6. i like to call myself p.p.bfly

  7. musing

  8. relaxing


tagged who?

Aurora

J. Andrew

Floots

Carol

Don Iannone

Jac

iamnasra

Gautami Tripathy

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poem:


storms/rain


storms/rain

the tiny ripples are all over

my skin

silently splashing

almost like

angry drums of music


and now i sit

listening to the storms

outside occur


only droppings of sky water

on everywhere

almost as the coins were

falling into a lock box


but it doesn’t disturb me

when my thoughts coming

on such a pale paper


shadowy dark evening clouds

have overcasts my backyard

while neighbors or someone who is

screaming on the top of human lungs

i heard them talking out loud

maybe in Spanish

i don’t know


all i wonder when the rainbow

comes upon the whitening cream skies and

gleam with lovely colors

maybe it might stretches from my house

to the Baptist Church

only one block away


somehow i don’t know about

the rainbow

cos sooner enough

it will be night time


so i’ll just stay in

my room and

enjoy the storms/rain



17 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

I seldom do tags!! Maybe I should do this in a poem!

I like the poem as I love the rains very much!

Kai said...

:-]

jac said...

I never take tags at all and most of my readers know that too, but to you I will make an exeption with a condition.

I don't like to tag any ??
Is it ok with you butterfly ??

Your poem is my fav subject too :)

Anonymous said...

That's one gorgeous poem!

iamnasra said...

Okay I thought to write you a poem..hope it will tell you about my butterfly poem ...

Butterfly
Fly into my sky
Touch every cloud of mine
Tickle my senses
Let me shy with rain
But I will hide you
Under any leave you wish
As you feel the chill of rain
Call for the sunshine
Sunshine will break through the rain
Ao you fly once again
A butterfly flies in the sky

polona said...

nice one, kai :)
i love storms/rain, especially when they result in rainbows...

Anonymous said...

A lovely poem. Filled with observation and so calming. I love the mention of the rainbow. Rainbows are my favourite things.
Whenever I see one, I feel warm inside and renewed and refreshed.
Hope you are well Kai.

trinitystar said...

Rain is beautiful ... it quenches the thirst of land and flowers.
Lovely poem Kai ... :o)

Anonymous said...

beautiful poem! I love musing too! =)

Carol said...

Thanks Miss Butterfly. I'm going to do mine as a poem too.

Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

Wonderful, Kai. Enjoyed the images in this poem.

floots said...

like this kai
i too love the rain
(though we've had too much of it today) :)

Movie Mazaa said...

Hiya Kai...
Hope u remember me!!
:D
How have ya been, pal?

Pat Paulk said...

Need some of those storms/rain here. Well done Kai!!

Kai said...

thanks for participating
& your commemts

jac said...

Tha tag is done ! Check it out, kai

Kai said...

ok:)